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Kitteh wrote:Magic

Primary Magic: Demon Bird Takeover
Secondary Magic:
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: This form of takeover allows the user to take on parts of demon birds even some of the special abilities the demon bird possesses. Some special abilities vary from just talons that are sharp enough to slice through steel as though it was tissues paper to elemental attacks from the take over(s) in use.
Aura Type: (Locked until B-rank)
Strengths:
-Very versatile
-Can use devastating combos
-Dragon and god slayers can't eat the elements used
Weaknesses:
-Demon slayers can eat any of the elements used
-Taking on demon birds can cause changes to the user's personality
-Max of 2 different takeovers can be used at once
-Physically the takeovers can't take much damage since birds are frail creatures
(Please not that you are weak against Holy and Water this is because of your strengths.)
Lineage:
Unique Abilities:

Spells:
Spell Template
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Name: Demon Phoenix Wings
Rank: D
Type: Utility,Offense
Description: This partial takeover allows the user to sprout black flame wings that allow flight and the user to shoot a volley of black flames at a target area. These wings allow a fly speed of at max twenty-five miles per hour. The user can shoot the black flames in a ten foot area, but does run the risk of the flames catching allies in the attack.(You can have the wings or the attack not both.)
Strengths:
-Allows flight
-Can cover a ten foot area in black flames(again Wings or damage not both.)
-Can't be eaten by dragon or god slayer(s)
Weaknesses:
-Can be eaten by fire demon slayer
-Can be put out by water of same rank or higher(Please note that if your flying you fall)
-enough water at once can hurt the user(since your strengths are alighned with demons your weak to both Holy and Water. Please note that its a 50% increase in damage from those sources.
-can be frozen solid(What can? the fire?)
Duration/Cooldown: Duration: 3 posts/Cooldown: 4 posts(Please note that Cooldown only starts after duration is finished.)

Name: Demon Roc's Talons
Rank: D
Type: Offense
Description: The user's hands and feet turn bird like with razor sharp talons that are able to slice through steel as if it was a piece of tissue paper. These talons tear through D-rank defenses with ease and do D-rank damage.
Strengths:
-Can cut through D-rank defenses with ease(as per Item rules you would only be able to break through weak equipment, please note this.)
-D-rank slicing damage
-Can slice through steel like it was tissue paper(redundant please remove and find a new strength.)
Weaknesses:
-Can crack if it hits something hard enough(Does this cause damage to the user or just end the spell?)
-Melee only
-The talons can get stuck in objects
-Can be easy to avoid if the enemy figures out the user's movement pattern
[Duration/Cooldown:[/b] Duration: 4 posts/Cooldown: 5 posts(again please not Cooldown does not start until duration ends.)



Name: Blue Jay claw
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Description: User's hand turns into giant Bird talon
arm grows another 5 inches(Please give more Description)
Strengths:
allows double strength(I will allow a 50% boost to strength but not a 100% sorry.)
pierces armour easily(what does this mean? Does it go through armor better , ignore armor what?
arm gives more swinging force(redundant Please remove and find another strength)
Weaknesses:
Arm is less wide than average and can be cut off easily
self pain when sharpening talon
smell and taste of arm attracts dragon slayers(This is a weakness that makes no sense in terms of the site please remove and find another
[Duration/Cooldown:[/b]
lasts 2 posts
4 post cool down(again Note the cooldown does not start until the duration ends.

List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)

Name:Roc's Gaze
Rank:D
Type:defensive
Description:Eagle face up in the sky shows a Beam of light and makes a foot wide Ravine in the ground protecting user(this is confusing please add more Description to make this understandable.
Strengths:
opponent could have death by fall(how is this accomplished? and you would not be able to make it deep enough to cause death only D rank damage.)
provides protection(How does this proctect you?)
scares opponent(you would only effect D ranks and you need to define how.)
Weaknesses:
if opponent is to close it will have no effect(how close?)
ground appears out of the sky falling on user if not dodged(what?)
makes a scare appear randomly in the user(You would only be able to scare other D ranks for a post, but you need to define what it does.)
User can refill(Refill what?)
Duration Cooldown:
crack stays forever spell lasts one post
cooldown 9 posts(this is a bit high)

Primary Magic: Demon Bird Takeover
Secondary Magic:
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: This form of take over allows the user to take on parts of demon birds even some of the special abilities the demon bird possesses. Some special abilities vary from just talons that are sharp enough to slice through steel as though it was tissues paper to elemental attacks from the take over(s) in use. This take over uses a lot of kinds of variety that the users take interest into. People from dark guilds use it to scare people by godlike people from the air. The legal guilds use the power to protect the people they love in there guild.

Name: Demon Roc's Talons
Rank: D
Type: Offense
Description: The user's hands and feet turn bird like with razor sharp talons that are able to slice through steel as if it was a piece of tissue paper. These talons tear through D-rank defenses with ease and do D-rank damage.
Strengths:-Can cut through small equipment with ease
-D-rank slicing damage
-The talons are hard to see and are used like knives (How you're hands and feet physically change into talons, it would be unlikely for other not to notice)
Weaknesses:
-Can crack if it hits a defense higher than D rank. (Will crack, not can)
-Melee only
-The talons can get stuck in wooden objects (Disregarded what I had commented on before, you stated that it could cut through any metal, so wood which physical integrity is weaker would definitely be shredded to pieces. You need a new weakness for this just as I previously said)
-Can be easy to avoid if the enemy figures out the users's movement pattern
[Duration/Cooldown:[/b] Duration: 4 posts/Cooldown: 5 posts cooldown doesnt start until duration ends

Name:Roc's Gaze
Rank:D
Type:defensive
Description:User shoots a harsh and intimidating Roc face looking as if it would eat you alive up in the sky that shows a Beam of light. The beam of light makes a foot wide Ravine in the ground protecting user. The Ravine itself is 20 feet deep. (better description needed, how does the ravine protect the user. What if it is filled with water and so on. You'll need to explain the purpose of the ravine better, as well as how it protects you.)

Strengths:
If the opponent is were the beam is going over the opponent will be teleported along with other ground
provides protection of a giant gap so the opponent cannot get close ( this doesn't come back in your description, it never states teleporting or how it works on the opponent what so ever. Please describe it into the spell itself. And thoroughly explain it. Because as it is now, I don't really get the teleportation part of the spell)
Eagle face causes intimidation
Weaknesses:
if opponent is 3 inches away it will have no affect ( I asked to have this explained better, you just put the word 'away' between it. I need you to tell me if it means 3 inches away from the user? The Ravine. What if the opponent is standing in those 3 inches?)
ground apears out of the sky from the ravine made falling on user if not dodged (What? the spell was used to protect you, it never states that ground appears from the sky? Please describe your entire spell better. Because I get the feeling you are adding weaknesses and strengths for the heck of it, and don't give it any proper thought.)
User gets nightmares of Roc's face after use(explain in the description as well, why does he get nightmares? How is the spell affecting him like that. In fact this isn't that much different then the 'Nausea' weakness you had before)
oponents can refill Ravine with land used to make it

Kitteh wrote:Magic

Primary Magic: Demon Bird Takeover
Secondary Magic:
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: This form of take over allows the user to take on parts of demon birds even some of the special abilities the demon bird possesses. Some special abilities vary from just talons that are sharp enough to slice through steel as though it was tissues paper to elemental attacks from the take over(s) in use. MY character loves this, because the one thing a cat can't do is have as sharp talons it also gives him interest on more enhancement type abilities like Demon Roc's talons. He also likes intimidation type moves to scare his victims, like Roc's gaze.
Aura Type: (Locked until B-rank)
Strengths:-Very versatile
-Can use devastating combos
-user can try a variety of kinds of techniques  
-magic doesn't need certain places to do it

Weaknesses: -Demon slayers can eat any of the elements used
-Taking on demon birds can cause changes to the user's personality
-Max of 2 different takeovers can be used at once What do you mean with this. Generally you can have four partials at once or one full. This makes it seem like you can have two of any type of takeover
-Physically the takeovers can't take much damage since birds are frail creatures
weak to Holy and water
Lineage:Demon mask
Unique Abilities:

Spells:
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Note: BE SPECIFIC AND ADD DETAILS

drank spells:

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