Andrew Arisu

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Name:Andrew Arisu (last name pronounced "Ah-Ree-zoo.")
Gender: male.
Age: 18
Birthday:April 20th.
Sexuality:Heterosexual.
Special Characteristics: small snake bite mark on left leg.

Personality: Andrew is very rash. he often thinks his first idea or thought is the best, and doesn't re-consider. In addition, he's very impatient, and fidgets often. he otherwise is very kind, laid-back, and compassionate. when he does try to think something over, he often over-thinks it, and gets a splitting headache. the one thing that changes this is when he's around girls. he is very weak-willed around them, and falls in love often. when he's in that state, he often stutters, and his other senses, along with sensibility, go right down the drain. he knows his weaknesses, strength and personality-wise, and strives to fix them. he is very sociable, and somewhat forgiving. the two subjects people cannot talk to him about (unless they're very close to him,) is his bite mark/the fact he may be slowly dying, and his sister. these are very touchy subjects, and he'll snap at anyone who brings it up in public. he'll often apologize after the fact, or after he's done something wrong, unless he refuses to believe he did something wrong. he is generally sociable, or at least he tries to. he respects others in his Guild, and tries to help them with even the littlest of problems they have, even if it's bad for him. the one thing that changes this is when he's around girls. he is very weak-willed around them, and falls in love often, and is easy prey to seduction. when he's in that state, he often stutters, and his other senses, along with sensibility, go right down the drain. he loses his cool in these situations, and often can't make choices for himself. he is a firm believer in second chances. against dark mages, he becomes completely rude and, somewhat hateful. ever since his little sister was killed by one, he's harbored a deep hate for them. when he's around a female dark mage, he remains about normal, and his ability and will to fight still go right down the drain.
in battle, he tries to be aware of everything, which causes his while he fights, he is often very laid-back, no matter how bad the situation is, as he believes there should be happiness, even in the darkest of times. that said, however, he also can be over-confident at times, turning his back on his enemy when he thinks he's won. he is also very brave, and will face down anyone. against a dark mage, he will refuse to kill, but will fight almost mercilessly. he doesn't believe in killing, unless the other person has killed.
his teamwork is about average. under a leader, he works fine, with almost unswerving loyalty, unless he thinks the leader, or their actions, are inhumane. while he can handle most plans, but complicated plans will fly over his head. as a leader himself, he is horrible. he couldn't lead an ant to the ant hill it was born in. once again, he knows his weaknesses, and attempts to change them for the better, although he's far from changing his leadership skills.
Likes:
.eating. are there people who don't enjoy eating?
.sparring. he rigorously trains, especially with others, to improve. he's done it for so long, it's become a hobby.
.cheering up others. he, like most people, enjoys the company of others, and usually goes out of his way to make someone feel better.
.doing jobs. connected to cheering others up, he strives to fix as much problems as he can. the fact he gets paid is just a bonus.
.flying fish. he doesn't really understand why people hate them, and considers them a delicacy.
Dislikes:
.doing nothing/being idle. he can't stand just sitting or waiting. after about 15 minuets of doing nothing, he starts to get aggravated.
.pessimists/downers. according to him, the way these people think drags them down. he also gets annoyed whenever one kills a good mood.
.dark mages. he believes that they shouldn't go around harassing people, or using something clearly forbidden, dark magic. that, and his sister was killed by a dark mage.
Motivations:
.overcome weaknesses and fears. he knows that he, and most people are not perfect, he strives to come as close as he can.
.find old master and finish training. halfway through his crystal-make training, his master left. no explanation, no good-bye. ever since, he's been looking for his master, to finish the training he started.
.possible cure? he was bitten by a snake as a child, and its deadly poison nearly killed him. while he was supposedly cured, the question of whether he still is remains, and he continues to look for a Cure-all, just in case.
.getting in a team. he realizes that he can't do everything on his own, and thinks he may need others in a team, not just a guild.
.revenge. yeah, yeah, "the most futile of causes." he's out to at least defeat the Dark mage that killed his sister.
Fears:
.snakes. a snake nearly killed him once, (full story on that up above,) and he's developed an extreme phobia for the scaly creatures.
.death. I don't need to describe this much. he knows it'll come eventually, but it's a scary thought.
.not being able to protect others. he doesn't want someone to die like his sister did before. because of this, it a fear he thinks about almost all the time.

General Appearance:


Height: about 5 foot 3.
Weight: 100 pounds.
Hair: his hair is brown and flat, with bangs.
Eyes: brown.
Skin Tone: very light, but not pale.
Appearance: he is very simplistic in what he does, even down to his appearance. he just seems like an average guy, appearance-wise. he wears a brown tee-shirt, and green shorts, only changing into larger versions of them when it's cold out. he'll also occasionally wear a white hat, but just happens randomly. sometimes he wears the hat, sometimes he doesn't.

Guild/Council: guild

Guild: Fairy tail.
Tattoo: red, underneath bangs.
Rank:d-rank