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    Tenno's Jacket

    Kurayami
    Kurayami

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    Lineage : Strength Of Hercules
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    Posts : 52
    Guild : Savage Skull
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    Experience : 75

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    First Skill: Dark Ecriture
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    Post by Kurayami 8th November 2014, 2:09 pm

    Name: Jacket
    Rank:Weak
    Type: Jacket
    Description:
    Spoiler:
    Strengths: -Leather is a little more durable, but with how this is made, allows easier movements in it to be made, as well as slight more protection then normal clothing
    -Jacket does not hinder agility cause of its design
    -Sytlish, makes him more liked upon site
    Weaknesses: -Open stomach, leaves a weak spot
    -Magic Vunerable, magic is slightly more effective against this jacket
    -Not waterproofed like most leather is
    -the looks of his jacket can make other envious and even want to attack him for his jacket
    Abilities:


    Last edited by Kurayami on 10th November 2014, 2:35 pm; edited 4 times in total
    Cirven
    Cirven

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    Post by Cirven 8th November 2014, 3:23 pm

    Hello Kurayami, I'll be reviewing this.

    Armors/weapons/magic items all are not ranked the same as mages and spells. They are ranked by weak, strong, strong +, legendary, legendary + and artifact. You can make as much weak armor as you want as long as it is registered btw. You have not purchased anything above weak so this will be ranked as a weak armor.

    This armor also cannot have any abilities so you will have to drop the ability you have there. Last thing is I will need you to add more strengths and weaknesses. The recommended amount is 3 strengths and 4 weaknesses. Weaknesses should be more than the strengths.

    Rules are here


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    Kurayami
    Kurayami

    Player 
    Lineage : Strength Of Hercules
    Position : None
    Posts : 52
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 75

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Dark Ecriture
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Kurayami 9th November 2014, 1:59 pm

    Edited


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    Cirven
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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Devil's Zeal
    Second Skill: Aphyon Jivven
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    Post by Cirven 9th November 2014, 8:08 pm

    "-No spell higher then d-rank can be casted faster"

    Drop that weakness. This jacket will not help you cast anything faster. It is just a jacket for now.


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    Kurayami
    Kurayami

    Player 
    Lineage : Strength Of Hercules
    Position : None
    Posts : 52
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 75

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Dark Ecriture
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Kurayami 10th November 2014, 7:27 am

    Edited


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    Cirven
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    Moderator- VIP- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Guild Master- Demon Slayer- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
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    Age : 35
    Experience : 833,050

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Devil's Zeal
    Second Skill: Aphyon Jivven
    Third Skill: Vir'ednith

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    Post by Cirven 10th November 2014, 2:34 pm

    "-Because of easier movement, Spells can be casted faster"

    What do you mean by this? We do not have any sort of way to make spell cast faster on site really. Drop this for something else.



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    Kurayami
    Kurayami

    Player 
    Lineage : Strength Of Hercules
    Position : None
    Posts : 52
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 75

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Dark Ecriture
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Kurayami 10th November 2014, 2:38 pm

    Hope this is better


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    Cirven
    Cirven

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    Devil's Advocate

    Moderator- VIP- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Guild Master- Demon Slayer- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : The Devil Jester
    Position : None
    Posts : 2448
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 35
    Experience : 833,050

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Devil's Zeal
    Second Skill: Aphyon Jivven
    Third Skill: Vir'ednith

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    Post by Cirven 10th November 2014, 2:39 pm

    Approved.

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