Dark Repulsor

by **Kodai Venator** 1st November 2014, 12:23 pm

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Dark Repulsor

by Kodai Venator 1st November 2014, 12:23 pm

Name: Dark Repulsor
Rank: Strong
Type: A longsword
Description:

Dark Repulsor's appearance:

Dark Repulsor looks much like this, but without the skulls and with different words on the blade. The words are replaced with these glyphs (From the hilt down):
γνώση | ισχύς
δύναμη | τιμή
θρίαμβος | δικαιοσύνη
Instead of skulls, the sword has glowing ankhs, the symbol of the Magic Council and the Rune Knights. Kodai wears the blade across his back, the hilt protruding over his right shoulder. The sword deals C-rank damage on impact.
Strengths:

Can operate at both mid-range and close-range.
The blade can slice through almost anything
The wielder need not pay attention to the fight

Weaknesses:

A strong B-ranked hit or above will shatter the weapon, predictably rendering it useless
If the sword gets more than five meters away from the wielder, the magical connection is severed and the blade drops to the ground, immobile
Can hurt the wielder if used improperly
The ability can be easily thwarted if the enemy simply snatches the sword from the air, as it would then fight for the enemy

Abilities:

Ability Name: Locomotion
Rank: Strong (C-rank)
Description: When this ability is activated, the sword becomes able to levitate and move about to it's wielder's mental commands, similar to telekinesis. This is useful, if the user must do something else that involves both arms.
Range:Five meters
Duration:Four posts
CooldownFive posts
Strengths:

The user doesn't need to hold the sword, freeing his arms to do other things
This can often disconcert enemies, allowing the wielder a moment of hesitation to exploit
The five-meter range keeps most enemies out of reach, stopping them from retaliating

Weaknesses:

The sword is still vulnerable to damage and breakage
The ability can be easily thwarted if the enemy simply snatches the sword from the air, as it would then fight for the enemy
If the wielder loses focus on the sword's movements, the ability will fail and the sword will fall to the ground, useless
If the wielder loses sight of the sword, the ability will fail and the sword will fall to the ground, useless

Last edited by Kodai Venator on 5th January 2015, 8:16 pm; edited 12 times in total

by **Godlike Frederik** 1st November 2014, 1:54 pm

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Re: Dark Repulsor

by Godlike Frederik 1st November 2014, 1:54 pm

needs ranges, how far can the crossbow shoot. Does shoot any specific bolts? Or magical bolts

What is the length of the spear form.

Will it be upgradable in the future, is it going to have heavy magic capabilities later on.

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by **Kodai Venator** 1st November 2014, 2:12 pm

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Re: Dark Repulsor

by Kodai Venator 1st November 2014, 2:12 pm

Bump

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by **Godlike Frederik** 1st November 2014, 2:45 pm

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Re: Dark Repulsor

by Godlike Frederik 1st November 2014, 2:45 pm

Fire= Red
Ice= Light Blue
Wind= White
Lightning= Yellow

Effects: Red (Fire) is explosive
Ice (Light Blue) freezes things on contact
Wind (White) grants a speed, and therefore range, boost to the bolt. The range boost is 25 yards.
Lightning (Yellow) emits lightning on contact.

adding these creates some new aspects that needs to be added. Also these are considered spells/abilities something that is only possible when the weapon is upgraded to a strong weapon. For now I would simply state, that when it is upgraded you will be able to use these kinds of attacks.

Following this, Red needs an explosion range. How big and how strong is it. As Blue, needs to tell for how long it stays frozen and that it can't freeze mages higher then your own rank. And even can't free ice slayers. Well it could, but it would just be futile. And same goes for lighting, impact and effects of such an strike.

For a weak weapon, stating that it shoots with normal bolts. Or basic magical bolts is more then enough. Or both even. However an variety of elemental arsenal is to much for just a weak class weapon. Those are considered spells.

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by **Kodai Venator** 1st November 2014, 2:53 pm

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Re: Dark Repulsor

by Kodai Venator 1st November 2014, 2:53 pm

Edited what you pointed out.

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by Guest 2nd November 2014, 1:55 pm

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Re: Dark Repulsor

by Guest 2nd November 2014, 1:55 pm

You've made the edits Fred required and I see no reason not to allow this now.

by **Kihia** 2nd November 2014, 6:18 pm

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Re: Dark Repulsor

by Kihia 2nd November 2014, 6:18 pm

Unlocked upon request to edit

Before Changes:

Kodai Venator wrote:Name: Ketsueki
Rank: Weak
Type: A crossbow/spear combo
Description: In it's default spear form, it is a ten-foot long staff of oak wood. The blade is large and angular. Beneath the spearhead is a crossbar. Both the head and the crossbar are made of a black metal.
In it's secondary form, the weapon is simply a crossbow with a spearhead below the arms. The crossbow has a maximum range of 75 yards. The crossbow can fire five types of bolts: regular, fire-enchanted, ice-enchanted, wind-enchanted, and lightning-enchanted. The heads of the magic bolts glow a color corresponding to their type.
Fire= Red
Ice= Light Blue
Wind= White
Lightning= Yellow

Effects: Red (Fire) is explosive. The explosion has a range of ten feet, but is rather pointless against Fire Slayers.
Ice (Light Blue) freezes things on contact. The freezing lasts for four posts, but is pointless against Ice Slayers.
Wind (White) grants a speed, and therefore range, boost to the bolt. The range boost is 25 yards.
Lightning (Yellow) emits lightning on contact. This lightning can spread through any conductive material, and electrocute anyone it touches. This electrocution lasts for two posts. This effect is rather useless against Lightning Slayers.

A small lacrima is built into the weapon. In spear form, the lacrima is visible as a blue ball set into the middle of the crossbar. In crossbow from, the lacrima is visible as a blue ball on the front, just below the bolt groove. This lacrima holds and powers a spell that allows the weapon to change it's shape.

The enchanted bolts are future upgrades.
Strengths:

Can operate at both long range and mid range.
Can collapse to a smaller form for carrying
The spearhead can pierce nearly anything
Magic bolts (future upgrade)

Weaknesses:

Is very heavy, especially in crossbow form. This makes it hard to carry.
The glowing lacrima makes stealth very hard.
Can't be thrown, the crossbar stops the spear from going in all the way. It's also hard to retrieve.
Can hurt the wielder if used improperly
Glowing bolts are even harder to miss than a small glowing lacrima

Abilities:

Can change forms

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by **Kodai Venator** 2nd November 2014, 6:29 pm

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Re: Dark Repulsor

by Kodai Venator 2nd November 2014, 6:29 pm

You may lock 'er up now, Sir Kihia.

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by **Kihia** 2nd November 2014, 7:00 pm

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Re: Dark Repulsor

by Kihia 2nd November 2014, 7:00 pm

Reapproved

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by **Aayla** 18th November 2014, 6:23 pm

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Re: Dark Repulsor

by Aayla 18th November 2014, 6:23 pm

Unlocked for upgrade to strong

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by **Aayla** 20th November 2014, 2:25 pm

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Re: Dark Repulsor

by Aayla 20th November 2014, 2:25 pm

Seeing as the spear can only use lightning while it is a strong weapon, I feel I can say...

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by **Kihia** 5th January 2015, 3:07 pm

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Re: Dark Repulsor

by Kihia 5th January 2015, 3:07 pm

Original:

Kodai Venator wrote:Name: Ketsueki
Rank: Strong
Type: A spear
Description: A ten-foot long staff of oak wood. The blade is large and angular. Beneath the spearhead is a crossbar. Both the head and the crossbar are made of a black metal. The spear has the ability to be enhanced with elemental magics, provided by the Lacrima built into it. The spearhead glows a color corresponding to which element is activated.

Fire= Red
Ice= Light Blue
Wind= White
Lightning= Yellow

Effects: Red (Fire) allows the spear to spew flames from the tip on contact with anything or when thrust or swung. The fire deals an extra half C-rank damage but is rather pointless against Fire Slayers.
Ice (Light Blue) freezes things on contact. The freezing lasts for two posts, but is pointless against Ice Slayers.
Wind (White), when activated, the spear lowers the resistance percentage amount all armors that aren't resistant to wind magic to 25%. This, however, is useless against Wind or Sky Slayers.
Lightning (Yellow) emits lightning on contact or when thrust or swung. This lightning can spread through any conductive material, and electrocute anyone it touches. This electrocution lasts for two posts. This effect is rather useless against Lightning Slayers.

A small lacrima is built into the weapon, visible as a blue ball set just below the blade. It is encircled by a metal ring that flows into the crossbar, then into a rod attaching the whole piece to the shaft. This causes the spearhead to be mounted onto what looks like the Rune Knight's symbol.

At the current rank, the spear can only be enhanced with lightning.

Strengths:

Can operate at both mid-range and close-range.
The spearhead can pierce nearly anything
Magic enhanced spearhead

Weaknesses:

The glowing lacrima and spearhead makes stealth very hard.
Can't be thrown, the crossbar stops the spear from going in all the way. It's also hard to retrieve.
Can hurt the wielder if used improperly
The elements the Lacrima emits might as well be an all-you-can-eat buffet for Slayers

Abilities:

Can be magically enhanced with four elements

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by **Cirven** 5th January 2015, 5:26 pm

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Re: Dark Repulsor

by Cirven 5th January 2015, 5:26 pm

*Busts through a nearby door and barrel rolls up to you*

Hey Kodai, I will be doing this review. Bump after and PM me if you have any questions or anything with the edits.

First thing, your ability needs to be made into a spell seeing as it is more of a spell than an ability. It will need a CD and duration that is good for C-rank and then(4 post duration with a 5 post CD should be good). Also please remove the CD from your weaknesses. This will also need to have a range that it can move away from you before dispersing the spell. Also you will need to be able to see where the sword is attacking and control it that way.

Having a sword that just moves around and fights on its own would be a bit much. This is to balance it out for PVP but for a story related interval where everyone agrees to it being as such and how things are going to be slightly different from the app, this will work. Keep the wording of this app for a PvP though.

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by **Kodai Venator** 5th January 2015, 8:17 pm

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Re: Dark Repulsor

by Kodai Venator 5th January 2015, 8:17 pm

Bump. Changed the name, cuz I couldn't stand the old one very much longer.

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by **Cirven** 7th January 2015, 9:50 pm

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Re: Dark Repulsor

by Cirven 7th January 2015, 9:50 pm

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