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    Keira's Character App

    Keiratenshii Nightingale
    Keiratenshii Nightingale

    Player 
    Lineage : None
    Position : None
    Posts : 22
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Wintersnow
    Experience : 0

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    Post by Keiratenshii Nightingale 25th October 2014, 2:23 am

    Name: Keiratenshii Nightingale
    Gender: Female
    Age: 17
    Birthday: 10/21
    Sexuality: Straight
    Special Characteristics: none

    Personality: Keira is known to be a calm and cool person. She is mostly like to have a very long patience with everyone except for the fact that someone threw a flying chair on her that'll make her enraged and get into a fight (and sometimes choke the person that did so). She is often seen smiling despite of  her past, every smile of hers is actually a fake one.

    Keira shows a cheerful and friendly attitude to her guild mates most of the time but that doesn't mean that she wants to get into the center of attention or getting in a group, she always prefer to be alone as she is known to be a real introvert and not an extrovert. She is cold and strict at times but most likely when she is very tired or it is the cause of the lost of her family, she shows this kind of personality to the people she doesn't talk too much. Keira is also a mysterious person since she always hides her secrets with her, not spilling every single one to her comrades nor anyone close with her.

    She's a person that doesn't want to be asked about her past or the person that asked it, will take her wrath other than the people that are TOO close to her. Keira is an honest person that sometimes that gets to the point of being sarcastic. She's a musical person but only sings at her house, and plays musical instruments at her house too because she finds it embarrassing if someone knew about this. She doesn't get angry or fight back when someone insults her, but she will do fight back if someone did it to her comrades. She just ignores people that are talking about her and let it be since she doesn't want chaos to be created.

    She gets angry at people that keeps comparing her to other people. She have a soft spot to animals and act nicely to them unless they are an opponent to hers. She does her work earlier than the due date given to her since she doesn't want too much work that gets piled up on her. She focuses on what she's doing, but she does gets distracted so easily.

    She only do on what is right, and fights for the people that deserves it, whether if the person is her guild mate or not. She's also an open minded person and speaks her mind off when needed. She always thinks about others than her own self and helps her comrades when they needed her and supports them unless they are making chaos or a childish play.

    Keira will never underestimate her opponent weak or strong and becomes very serious when she's facing her opponent at a battle. She thinks first before attacking an opponent or doing any actions and she doesn't get easy on people that hurts her comrades. She doesn't kill her opponents , she only spare them because she respect their lives and thinks that they also have a family to live with. She doesn't let one of her comrades lose in a battle when almost losing, is she sees them almost losing she'd help them and fight both opponents making it harder for to fight. She'll offer her life to her comrades when needed.

    Likes:
    >Dancing: It's her hobby when she was still a child.
    >Reading: It's what she do in most of her free time.
    >Singing: Her mother used to sing for her.
    >Music: It makes her calm and relaxed.

    Dislikes:
    >Sweets: Keira's disgusted by the taste of it.
    >Crowded Places: For her she's feeling like a tuna squashed inside a can.
    >People threatening the lives of her special ones: Who wouldn't hate them?


    Motivations:
    >For her to be a famous mage.
    >To protect anyone that she loves because she wanted to be useful.
    >To continue living and find her true happiness.

    Fears:
    >Trypophobia: She's disgusted by seeing those many holes in one object.
    >Loneliness: She doesn't want to feel empty as she was , when she was still a child.
    >Being Useless: She doesn't want to feel when her parents' are murdered. She doesn't want to be a burden to her friends especially in battles.

    General Appearance


    Height: 162 cm
    Weight: 48 kg
    Hair:  blonde hair that is tied up into a ponytail.
    Eyes: Blue
    Skin Tone: pale white
    Appearance: Keira wears a Japanese school uniform most of the time.

    Guild/Council

    Guild: Lamia Scale
    Tattoo: Blue and left thigh
    Rank: D


    Last edited by Keiratenshii Nightingale on 29th October 2014, 8:02 am; edited 2 times in total
    Felicity
    Felicity

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    Post by Felicity 28th October 2014, 2:09 am

    Okay, so I see here that you just have too much history in your personality- and its just not needed in this app. Your character's history can all go here. You also happen to mention too many characters that fall in a relationship with yours-- and that's usually fine; but in this case, its too extensively done.

    To keep this short, just remove all the history and character relationships of your character and simply focus on the personality.

    Bump when the edits are made.


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    Keiratenshii Nightingale
    Keiratenshii Nightingale

    Player 
    Lineage : None
    Position : None
    Posts : 22
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Wintersnow
    Experience : 0

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    Post by Keiratenshii Nightingale 29th October 2014, 8:03 am

    Bump
    Felicity
    Felicity

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Slayer- Dragon Slayer- Dark Guild Ace- S-Rank- A-Rank- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Advertisement Achievement Badge- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Evil Angel
    Position : None
    Posts : 2984
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 25
    Experience : 75987.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Toxic Scourge
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    Post by Felicity 30th October 2014, 1:39 am

    You did quite well with the edits. Impressed, to say the least. ^^

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    WE'LL HELP TONIGHT TO SPLIT ITS SEAMS
    GIVE THE BRUISES OUT LIKE GIFTS, YOU'LL GET THE PICTURE OF YOUR DREAMS
    Keira's Character App ObrztW


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