Skia (Kodai's Pet)

Name: Skia
Rank: Strong
Species: Direwolf
Type: Combat pet
Description: A completely black wolf, as big as a horse. (pic will come later)||| Skia's personality is much like her master's.
Abilities: Skia can communicate telepathically with Kodai, her master.


Name: Shadow Travel
Rank: D (For now)
Description: Skia sinks into her shadow, teleporting away. The shadow moves as fast as she would in normal circumstances.
Strengths: Makes for a quick escape.
Can extend to Kodai, as the person with the closest bond to her, but only if he has physical contact with her.
Can allow her to attack and retreat like a ghost, because she can't be hurt when in her shadow.
Can be used two times in one post if it's just transporting her and one time per post if she's carrying Kodai.
Weaknesses: Three post cooldown for just herself.
Four post cooldown for her and Kodai.
Visible shadow on the ground.
If bright light is projected directly on her while she is shadow traveling, she is forcibly removed from her shadow.
Only works on flat-ish ground, doesn't move up obstructions taller than herself.



Name: Telepathy
Rank: D
Description: Allows Skia to communicate with the one with closest bond to her, i.e. her master, Kodai.
Strengths: Allows Skia to communicate at all
Allows Kodai and Skia to communicate silently
Great for undercover or stealth missions
Weaknesses: Doesn't work well over a distance of ten miles
Doesn't work if Skia is in her shadow without Kodai
Certain materials, like iron and stone, weaken the connection
Other materials, like water and lead, completely block the connection

Edits are in This color.

Kodai Venator wrote:Name: Skia
Rank: Strong
Species: Direwolf
Type: Combat pet
Description: A completely black wolf, as big as a horse. (Pic will come later)||| Skia's personality is much like her master's.
Abilities: Skia can communicate telepathically with Kodai, her master. Speaking telepathically is considered an ability for your pet so this would be your other ability.


Name: Shadow Travel
Rank: D (For now)
Description: Skia sinks into the shadows, teleporting away.
Strengths: Makes for a quick escape.
Can extend to Kodai, as the person with the closest bond to her. You mean her shadow extends to Kodai?
Can allow her to attack and retreat like a ghost.
Can be used four times in one post if it's just transporting her. This doesn't sound viable seeing that people should have time to react against it unless she is moving that fast into the shadows that a person cannot attack her which I don't think she could do at D-rank
Can be used three times per post if she's carrying Kodai. Same as above.
Weaknesses: Four post cooldown for just herself.
Six post cooldown for her and Kodai.
Visible shadow on the ground.
Doesn't work well in bright light. This should not work at all in bright light seeing as it is shadow based. It should be able to work around bright light though.
Only works on flat-ish ground, doesn't move up obstructions taller than herself.
Also you need one more weakness because your weaknesses are supposed to be one higher than your strengths. You can merge a strength with another if you want or drop one entirely if you can't come up with another weakness.

(Will think of the other ability later))

I have one more weakness than strengths. I counted. Also, Rogue's shadow travel works quite well in bright light, I just wanted to dial it down a little.


Edit: I miscounted.

Sorry Kodai I missed a few things last night with how tired I was.

Kodai Venator wrote:Name: Skia
Rank: Strong
Species: Direwolf
Type: Combat pet
Description: A completely black wolf, as big as a horse. (Pic will come later)||| Skia's personality is much like her master's.
Abilities: Skia can communicate telepathically with Kodai, her master.


Name: Shadow Travel
Rank: D (For now)
Description: Skia sinks into her shadow, teleporting away. How fast does the shadow move once she is inside it and how fast does she move inside her shadow?
Strengths: Makes for a quick escape.
Can extend to Kodai, as the person with the closest bond to her, but only if he has physical contact with her.
Can allow her to attack and retreat like a ghost, because she can't be hurt when in her shadow.
Can be used two times in one post if it's just transporting her and one time per post if she's carrying Kodai.
Weaknesses: Two post cooldown for just herself. I feel like this should be 3 posts and not 2.
Two post cooldown for her and Kodai. You have this as the same cooldown as if she just used it. Please increase this or come up with another weakness. I think a 4 post cooldown would work here
Visible shadow on the ground.
If bright light is projected directly on her while she is shadow traveling, she is forcibly removed from her shadow.
Only works on flat-ish ground, doesn't move up obstructions taller than herself.



Name: Telepathy
Rank: D
Description: Allows Skia to communicate with the one with closest bond to her, i.e. her master, Kodai.
Strengths: Allows Skia to communicate
Weaknesses: Doesn't work well over a distance of ten miles
Doesn't work if Skia is shadow traveling alone.
|You need at least 3 strengths and 4 weaknesses here.

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